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loveydovey by ~gelal:icongelal:

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Crazy in this bottled heat.
Crazy from continued visions.
Crazy in love at the dry twists of fate.
Crazy without wings, jumping off every building.

Surviving you one kiss at a time.
My plaintiff's plea trying to unlock you,
jury's out.
Lips trembling in want, you painting all of me blue.

Fingertips up my spine with a suicidal grace.
Rose petal skin touched by butterfly wings,
I couldn't help but give love to that face.
Uplifting fog dissassembles Gray graces.

I've never seen the snow like this.
                Saw the light off those hips.
                  Did you know?
                                         the smell of vanilla always reminds me of you.

I could fall again into your trap,
a fatal sprawl into tossed seas.
Lost in those eyes again, baited breath the map.
Heat us up now, fingers probing to 800 degrees.

Absolution crushing the sweat off us,
lifting dizzy consciousness.
Burying convictions in your breast
i can't move again.

Honey off your lips sustains me.
Fire-dimmed irises wrap and hold,
lost islands in a green sea.
A touch of lips, so bold.

Crazy kisses kept me in check.
  kept my attention at your neck.
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for those that said it couldn't be done.





© Chris Price *Mine dammit.
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~lXlDumbasslXl:iconlXlDumbasslXl: May 23, 2007, 7:17:31 AM
Nice, Faving for two reasons thought. Cause its Great n Cause Its usable as blackmail. ;)

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~gelal:icongelal: May 23, 2007, 8:13:01 AM
:lol:

Thanks for the fav. Not sure about the Blackmail though. I suppose I asked for it though...

:fella:

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"I recognize terror as the finest emotion and so I will try to terrorize the reader. But if I find that I cannot terrify, I will try to horrify, and if I find that I cannot horrify, I'll go for the gross-out. I'm not proud." Stephen King
=fallenidle:iconfallenidle: May 23, 2007, 8:19:10 AM
still amazing, even after just waking up. had to read it once more before work; the imagery will keep my day from being a dull shell.

:)

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~gelal:icongelal: May 23, 2007, 8:21:31 AM
Glad to help with that. I still don't like it very much. The next will be better I think.

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"I recognize terror as the finest emotion and so I will try to terrorize the reader. But if I find that I cannot terrify, I will try to horrify, and if I find that I cannot horrify, I'll go for the gross-out. I'm not proud." Stephen King
=fallenidle:iconfallenidle: May 23, 2007, 8:22:42 AM
ANOTHER loveydovey? Whoa! You must have tripped over some angel, or Carmen Electra or something.

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"You do drink, don't you?"
"I did just say I was a writer."
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~gelal:icongelal: May 23, 2007, 8:28:04 AM
:lol:

Probable but not likely. I just have the words swimming around, so nothing left but put them in the proper order and forget them.

You are also close to being tagged. You've been warned... ;)

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"I recognize terror as the finest emotion and so I will try to terrorize the reader. But if I find that I cannot terrify, I will try to horrify, and if I find that I cannot horrify, I'll go for the gross-out. I'm not proud." Stephen King
~Saphire282:iconSaphire282: May 23, 2007, 8:58:36 AM
:rofl: so you accomplished it, I am both proud, and very humored. I will keep my promise of faving this... :giggle:

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~gelal:icongelal: May 23, 2007, 9:05:13 AM
:lol:

Yeppers and thanks.

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"I recognize terror as the finest emotion and so I will try to terrorize the reader. But if I find that I cannot terrify, I will try to horrify, and if I find that I cannot horrify, I'll go for the gross-out. I'm not proud." Stephen King
~lXlDumbasslXl:iconlXlDumbasslXl: May 23, 2007, 12:56:11 PM
:devil: Indeed you did sign the contract...

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